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12 July 2008 @ 08:41 am
New NCIS Fic: During In The Zone  
Title: During In the Zone
Fandom: NCIS
Series: The Bachelor and the Bobbysoxer
Characters: Tony DiNozzo and Maddie Tyler
Prompts:For [info]12_stories#5 Home
Word Count: 514
Rating: K+
Summary: Actually, she’s a complete slob. It’s nice. It reminds me of you and your apartment or mine after you been there five minutes.
Author's Notes: The ninth in a series of post-eps from Requiem to Judgment Day focusing on a budding relationship between Tony (the bachelor) and Maddie (the bobbysoxer)
Why, you may well ask. 1.) The first time I watched “Requiem” I was struck by Tony’s line about wanting to get to know Maddie. The line was supposed to be leering and obnoxious, but Tony has grown a lot the last year and I thought it would be interesting if there was a relationship between them. By the next morning, I’d talked myself into being a huge Tony/Maddie shipper. Granted it is a dingy surrounded by aircraft carriers in the NCIS shipper’s ocean, but I’m always up for a challenge. 2.) My parents had a nearly twenty year age difference and were the happiest couple I ever knew, so I believe it works and like to explore it in fics.



notabobbysoxer: How’s Iraq?

morelikestevemcqueen: Just beautiful.

notabobbysoxer: Is that sacasm I’m detecting?

morelikestevemcqueen: If you mean sarcasm, then yes.

notabobbysoxer: Shut up… you know I can’t speel.

notabobbysoxer: I mean spell.

morelikestevemcqueen: Jardine’s looking at me funny cause I’m lol at the computer.

notabobbysoxer: Speaking of Jardine… how is she doing with all the dust and dirt and stuff.

morelikestevemcqueen: She’s ok. Apparently, the washing thing is more about germs. Actually, she’s a complete slob. It’s nice. It reminds me of you and your apartment or mine after you been there five minutes.

notabobbysoxer: I just mentally punched your shoulder.

morelikestevemcqueen: I just winced.

morelikestevemcqueen: I do miss you though.

notabobbysoxer: I know, I miss you too.

notabobbysoxer: I’m at your place tonight. Hope that is okay.

morelikestevemcqueen: Of course. I like the idea of you staying at my place… sleeping in my bed. Although, if I was there then we wouldn’t be sleeping.

notabobbysoxer: Nuh uh, not doing that.

morelikestevemcqueen: Doing what? He asks innocently.

notabobbysoxer: Innocent my ass. I’m not having cybersex with you on a government satellite.

morelikestevemcqueen: Okay, first, you’re one talking about your ass. Two, what if I was actually deployed over here. Three, that reminds me this government satellite sucks, so if I suddenly disappear its cause I lost signal not been blown up. Okay?

notabobbysoxer: Thanks :-(

morelikestevemcqueen: What?

notabobbysoxer: I’ve been trying not to think about the fact that you could get blown up and you have to bring it up. And make a damn joke out of it. It isn’t funny.

morelikestevemcqueen: Sorry.

morelikestevemcqueen: Maddie, are you still there? I really am sorry.

notabobbysoxer: I know, I just…

notabobbysoxer: What if something really does happen? Will I have to hear about it on the news? How will I know?

morelikestevemcqueen: Mads, I’m sorry. I should have told you. I changed the contact info before I left. If anything happens you’ll get a call from NCIS… probably Jenny.

notabobbysoxer: Really?

morelikestevemcqueen: Yeah. Really. I changed all my emergency information and benefits to you. I mean, Gibbs will already know if something happens to me, so why have him as my emergency contact. Besides, you understand call waiting.

notabobbysoxer: Huh?

morelikestevemcqueen: Nothing. Just something I told Kate once.

notabobbysoxer: Okay.

notabobbysoxer: Thank you for doing that, btw. It means a lot to me. And it means a lot that I didn’t have to ask.

morelikestevemcqueen: I try. I don’t and won’t always get it right but I try.

notabobbysoxer: You do pretty good.

morelikestevemcqueen: Well, I’d better go. Jardine is trying to sleep and my clicking of the keys is keeping her up. Her eyes are sending death rays this way.

notabobbysoxer: Ooo… Scary. Get some sleep. You need to be sharp tomorrow.

morelikestevemcqueen: Will do. Love you, Mads. I’ll be home soon.

notabobbysoxer: Love you, too. I’ll be waiting.

morelikestevemcqueen: Have a good day.

notabobbysoxer: Sleep well.

morelikestevemcqueen is now logged off

notabobbysoxer is now logged off
 
 
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Nikki: Gibbs/Ducky (Ducky grabs Gibbs)[info]nakeisha on July 12th, 2008 01:34 pm (UTC)
*Sniffles*

*Smiles*

*Sighs happily*

Love it.

An excellent idea and I like the back references too.

I could see them both so very clearly.

You know I think I better get your banner made and the links post put together at this rate :-)

And I do hope you're planning on more after you finish this 12!
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 12th, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

Oh, I'm glad you could picture it, cause it is weird writing something that is basically all dialogue.

I should have everything posted tonight or early tomorrow morning (here). Confession: once I realized that there were twelve episode I wanted to post-ep, I ran to your comm and picked the table I wanted. Then I wrote the stories and then asked for permission. I wanted to be able to post fairly quickly.

Actually, since this was so well liked, I'm thinking that I'm going to continue using your "Dark" table. I just have to decide if is going to be 12 Tony/Maddie stories or others as well.
Nikki: Gibbs/Ducky (Arms)[info]nakeisha on July 12th, 2008 03:43 pm (UTC)
You're welcome.

I could, very clearly.

*Smiles at your confession* I like the way you think.

Oh, good. I am pleased there will be more.
Jenny: Art - dandelion blue[info]jenwryn on July 12th, 2008 02:21 pm (UTC)
Heh, this is so sweet, and I can just imagine Jardine glaring at him, lol.

Plus I love the usernames.

And the sheer damn gorgeousness of it all. Sweet Tony!
*hugs him tightly*
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 12th, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I did the usernames that way, cause I can see Maddie quickly establishing AIM or something so they could chat while he was away and their conversation was still fresh in her mind.
RayRay: ncis-dear lj[info]morethanexist on July 12th, 2008 02:56 pm (UTC)
My internet crapped out on me yesterday so I just read the last 6 of these in a row.

Loved them telling each other about their dad's. And later Tony admitting that she's the first person he had ever told the whole story to. How they got together as a couple made me laugh, and Maddie's obsession with firsts. Loved Tony consulting her about Ziva and telling her about Jeanne. And the 39 steps. I've been wanting to see that since it got nominated for a Tony. Or did it win? Not sure.

This one was awesome. It sort of made me sad, but only because it was so real. And how Tony will always try to do inappropriate things over a government satellite.

Also yays for posting it all before next week, I'm going away too.
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 12th, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
Ugh! I hate when that happens.

I wanted them to have something deep and personal to share and the dad's issue seemed like a good idea. Again, wanted to show the relationship a little deeper and stronger. Had to deal with him staring at that Detective's butt somehow, right? 39 Step won something, but I can't remember what. It wasn't best play cause that went to August: Oswadgo County. And, yes, I've wanted to see it since I read a review in our local paper, but seeing at the Tonys made me want to see it more.

I did it this way because of memories of my best friend hunch over her laptop IM'ing her hubby when he was in Iraq.

Yay for going away!
RayRay: rlf-cote[info]morethanexist on July 12th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
It's been going on and off for a while and I'm seriously hating it.

Yes, and I was waiting to see how you were going to do that. It won lighting design for a play, and something else that the computer doesn't seem to want to tell me. I know it was nominated for best play though.

Boo for the MASSIVE amount of email waiting when I come back.
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 13th, 2008 05:58 am (UTC)
And it should have WON! The one that did win just looked depressing and sad and yuck.

Clo: Gibbs and Abby - Don't Worry[info]citymusings on July 13th, 2008 03:58 am (UTC)
Oh, that's so sweet. Just what I needed after a hard day.
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 13th, 2008 05:51 am (UTC)
Glad you liked. Sorry about the hard day.
Clo: Gibbs - Jethro and Shannon[info]citymusings on July 13th, 2008 05:57 am (UTC)
's okay. I'll be fine tomorrow. Online Drama just sucks. Particularly when you have to mod it.
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on July 13th, 2008 06:01 am (UTC)
Sometimes I think the on-line crap can be worst than RL, cause it is supposed to be an escape from all that!
Clo[info]citymusings on July 13th, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
Yep.
 
 

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