Posted this to hawaii50betas
, but thought maybe someone on my flist could help me out.Title:
Untitled at the moment, but being called Ohana Something in my head.Genre:
This may change, but right now it is Kidfic, Slash, possible Threesome element, OC's and OC DeathficRating:
I don't think it will stray much beyond PG-13/R cat.Pairings or Characters:
Steve/Danny, Grace, Rachel, OC's with some Kono, Chin and maybe JennaType of beta:
Content, voice, plot. My grammar is pretty good, but this story is getting out of control. I've got over 6000 words and haven't hit the main plot, so I need a good content/flow beta. Also, I've been writing this in present tense, which is weird for me and I need someone to make sure I'm not screwing up.Length:
Has to be 40,000, but I'm beginning to worry that it will be more.Short Summary:
Post Season Finale. Danny's best friend, Carrie, and her two kids are an important part of his life. Now that he and Steve are finally together, Danny wants them to be an important part of Steve's life too. A visit to Hawaii and a tragedy back in Jersey insures this.
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